The look is ok, the grey really doesn't make anything pop or stand out. I especially don't care for the grey bold then grey text with a grey background, see where I'm going????
The pics in the lower right corner also have a play/pause are they videos?? If so they don't work. If not loose the play/pause feature. I think it's a slide show but not sure.
Indoor training: since you don't have it, don't advertise you lost it. When you do get a new place, BANNER we now offer indoor training.
At most, coming soon our new indoor training center.
Partially naked guys on a chair lift is not the company I want training me or my kids. I'd edit them out. I would put a banner in the video, something like, here are some of our students during their park lesson to differentiate that those aren't the instructors. The video itself is fine. Could be my connection, guessing not, but that video is super laggy for me.
Not bashing it, just my honest thoughts.
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-Slyder
Last edited by slyder; 04-10-2012 at 07:58 PM.
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