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Old 07-04-2010, 12:47 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey guys,

I could use some honest feedback on some designs. Anything is appreciated.
Hopefully this isn't breaking forum rules. I'm not trying to promote. I just need some feedback.


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Old 07-04-2010, 01:00 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Way to much going on imo
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overall I like them .. this style is def up to date with some of the more known brands ..

shirt 1
like the alternating bold type .. this is my fave of the three .. lose the hyphens maybe?

shirt 2
hate the font on this one .. looks like one of those online things where you place something funny on a real bilboard if you know what I m talking about

shirt 3
like this one as well .. although maybe some type of alt coloring or something within the message to help break it up a bit
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Shirt #1: I like the catch phrase, but with the font it seems like it's too much to read.
Shirt #2: Phrase and font aren't doing it for me, kinda lame.
Shirt #3: Favorite of the bunch, cool phrase, cool font, perfect size.
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I didn't know throwing some text in Arial on a tee shirt could be considered as "Design"
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I didn't know throwing some text in Arial on a tee shirt could be considered as "Design"
My thoughts as well.... I'm even more surprised that people are liking it.

Might as well go to some sight that will make shirts for you and design your own since it's only text.
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I didn't know throwing some text in Arial on a tee shirt could be considered as "Design"
Type can be considered designs. Tracking, kerning, leading, and appeal is what make it designs.

So the overall feeling is
1. could use work
2. scrap it
3. could use work

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Font is alright if it has a design also, imo....

A company just recently brought up who has some alright t-shirts
Tyrant Snowboards | APPAREL

See how their shirts also have an actual graphic image? And a font that doesn't look like you're writing an English paper with.


These guys have a cool thing going as well
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Font is alright if it has a design also, imo....

A company just recently brought up who has some alright t-shirts
Tyrant Snowboards | APPAREL

See how their shirts also have an actual graphic image? And a font that doesn't look like you're writing an English paper with.


These guys have a cool thing going as well
DIFFERENT BREED CLOTHING on MySpace Music - Free Streaming MP3s, Pictures & Music Downloads
See how my stuff and their stuff is completely different styles? No disrespect to them, but none of that appeals to me. I prefer simple and clean over distressed metal band text.
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I see how it's different, absolutely.

I was simply trying to say adding some sort of flash to your text may help your sale. I don't mean to sound like a dick, but your designs can be made by anyone, at literally any age.

Keep making simple text shirts if you want man, I'm not invested in your company. I'm just offering my opinion.

My personal opinion is that logos should be fairly simple, but when you're putting out a t-shirt or something like that, it could use a little flash. But to each their own.
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