English grammar, Help me with a season greetings and thank you note.
Hello first I will explain a little so you all know what this is about. I have been delivering newspaper every morning for the past 4 years and every year on Christmas time my wife and I send out holiday cards with our return address on it and about half of the people we delivery it to send us back they best wishes with a gift of some kind, most cash. A very few of those people sends out a great tip. This year I want to take the time and say thank you for those people with a hand written message with better cards than the ones I send to the majority.
My English is not very good, I depend too much on google and auto correct to correct my misspelling and I don't want to send something wrong. So if anyone can check if this is ok, or add anything to it to make it look nicer I appreciate very much. So far what I came up with is this:
this Holiday Season
the coming year!
Another year has passed
and I want to
take the time to say
for your great generosity
To you, family and friends,
From your newspaper carrier,
So how is that, please anyone with a better english than me, fell free to correct any mistakes.
Last edited by MadeInBrazil; 12-04-2014 at 10:41 AM.