You have one half assed looking box that you filmed with what I can only assume is a camera goggle. Fix your white balance, pick a better song, move angles, stop with the ride on boxes, and don't ask us for feedback take some initiative to go I can be awesome I will do it myself.
I've been thinking about setting up a park at my house. I've got about 4 acres that's mostly hills. I'd say a 30-40 degree slope or better. Some years the snow sticks around pretty good. It would be nice to have a little park set up! Maybe some little jumps a 1/4 way up the hill and some rails down from that aways.
I've been wanting to do this for three years now. Still procrastinating because the hill is still mess of rotting trees due to a fire in the 2000's. (Summer pics are all I have on this comp.) The run out would be left of the dog from the hill you see in the pic with the house (Ok.. Mobile home)
There's tons of junk at the job-sites I can use to make features too, Stuff I usually take the scrap yard!