SMdskate covered a lot of it and heres what i think
you had a lot of good ideas with the angles and all the but you should smooth everything out more. what i mean is that it the camera motion wasnt very smooth
to me it almost looked like a teaser for a long snowboard film. because there was a lot of shots crammed into a short video i think if you took some of the bad shots out and put slow-mo and a bunch of other effect stuff on it the whole film would have been smoother
also you had a lot of filler shots ( the non-snowboarding shots, like strapping in an stuff like that)
filler shots an important part of a snowboard movie but you there wasnt really enough snowboarding shots to balance it all out
and last the song wasnt really a snowboarding song at all
i dont really know how to explain what a snowboard song is but i find that a lot of the songs i like for snowboard videos are in the techno, soft rap, some pop songs genre. to me snowboarding kindof has its own music genre
but keep making videos it looks like you have a lot of potential to make some sick edits, but your just not very experienced yet.
so watch other peoples videos and keep experimenting with footage on your own thats what editing is all about.
heres my youtube page if you want to watch some of mine
YouTube - wakebrdwnder30's Channel