Haha, i really wanted to be the person that tells you "you suck, dont even think about getting sponsors" and as much as i want to say it you're otherwise. You have loads of skills. Like your pretty fucking good. haha good job.
Not a bad watch, I'm not qualified to judge your technique but it does look a little messy. Reminded me of........ Cloverfield, sort that camera out boy, I felt seasick. Keep at it!!You are a lot better than I am but first, fire your camera man or get a tripod. Best of luck with getting sponsored